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  • LA Ute
    Receiver of Memory
    • Nov 2008
    • 19512

    #1

    A Father's Day poem

    Here's a poem by the American poet Robert Francis, written in a rather difficult form called a sestina. I like to re-read it every Father's Day:
    Hallelujah: A Sestina

    A wind's word, the Hebrew Hallelujah.
    I wonder they never give it to a boy
    (Hal for short) boy with wind-wild hair.
    It means Praise God, as well it should since praise
    Is what God's for. Why didn't they call my father
    Hallelujah instead of Ebenezer?

    Eben, of course, but christened Ebenezer,
    Product of Nova Scotia (hallelujah).
    Daniel, a country doctor, was his father
    And my father his tenth and final boy.
    A baby and last, he had a baby's praise:
    Red petticoat, red cheeks, and crow-black hair.

    A boy has little to say about his hair
    And little about a name like Ebenezer
    Except that he can shorten either. Praise
    God for that, for that shout Hallelujah.
    Shout Hallelujah for everything a boy
    Can be that is not his father or grandfather.

    But then, before you know it, he is a father
    Too and passing on his brand of hair
    To one more perfectly defenseless boy,
    Dubbing him John or James or Ebenezer
    But never, so far as I know, Hallelujah,
    As if God didn't need quite that much praise.

    But what I'm coming to--Could I ever praise
    My father half enough for being a father
    Who let me be myself? Sing Hallelujah.
    Preacher he was with a prophet's head of hair
    And what but a prophet's name was Ebenezer,
    However little I guessed it as a boy?

    Outlandish names of course are never a boy's
    Choice. And it takes time to learn to praise.
    Stone of help is the meaning of Ebenezer.
    Stone of Help--what fitter name for my father?
    Always the Stone of Help however his hair
    Might graduate from black to Hallelujah.

    Such is the drama of boy and father.
    Praise from a grayhead now with thinning hair.
    Sing Ebenezer, Robert, sing Hallelujah!

    Happy Father's Day, cuffers.
    “There is a great deal of difference in believing something still, and believing it again.”
    ― W.H. Auden


    "God made the angels to show His splendour - as He made animals for innocence and plants for their simplicity. But men and women He made to serve Him wittily, in the tangle of their minds."
    -- Robert Bolt, A Man for All Seasons


    "It is only with the heart that one can see rightly; what is essential is invisible to the eye."
    --Antoine de Saint-Exupery
  • Non Sequitur
    Where did I put my bodkin
    • Nov 2008
    • 5773

    #2
    I don't mean to nit-pick, but that poem didn't even rhyme. I can only guess after spending hours trying to rhyme "hallelujah" on the first line, he simply gave up. Were it I writing the poem, I would have found a way to work in "Fallujeh". But, that's just me.
    "The mind is not a boomerang. If you throw it too far it will not come back." ~ Tom McGuane

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    • LA Ute
      Receiver of Memory
      • Nov 2008
      • 19512

      #3
      Originally posted by Non Sequitur View Post
      I don't mean to nit-pick, but that poem didn't even rhyme. I can only guess after spending hours trying to rhyme "hallelujah" on the first line, he simply gave up. Were it I writing the poem, I would have found a way to work in "Fallujeh". But, that's just me.
      It's a sestina.
      “There is a great deal of difference in believing something still, and believing it again.”
      ― W.H. Auden


      "God made the angels to show His splendour - as He made animals for innocence and plants for their simplicity. But men and women He made to serve Him wittily, in the tangle of their minds."
      -- Robert Bolt, A Man for All Seasons


      "It is only with the heart that one can see rightly; what is essential is invisible to the eye."
      --Antoine de Saint-Exupery

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      • Non Sequitur
        Where did I put my bodkin
        • Nov 2008
        • 5773

        #4
        Originally posted by LA Ute View Post
        It's a sestina.
        Just because you give it a fancy name, doesn't make it legit. It's like when my wife discovered my stash of porn, and I assured her it wasn't porn but erotic literature. Didn't fly.
        "The mind is not a boomerang. If you throw it too far it will not come back." ~ Tom McGuane

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        • LA Ute
          Receiver of Memory
          • Nov 2008
          • 19512

          #5
          Originally posted by Non Sequitur View Post
          Just because you give it a fancy name, doesn't make it legit. It's like when my wife discovered my stash of porn, and I assured her it wasn't porn but erotic literature. Didn't fly.
          Rats. I forgot how many BYU grads we have on this board. Next time I'll offer some verse from "Especially for Mormons," or at least appearing in a Deseret Book publication.
          “There is a great deal of difference in believing something still, and believing it again.”
          ― W.H. Auden


          "God made the angels to show His splendour - as He made animals for innocence and plants for their simplicity. But men and women He made to serve Him wittily, in the tangle of their minds."
          -- Robert Bolt, A Man for All Seasons


          "It is only with the heart that one can see rightly; what is essential is invisible to the eye."
          --Antoine de Saint-Exupery

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          • PaloAltoCougar
            Semper infra dignitatem
            • Nov 2008
            • 16921

            #6
            Originally posted by LA Ute View Post
            Rats. I forgot how many BYU grads we have on this board. Next time I'll offer some verse from "Especially for Mormons," or at least appearing in a Deseret Book publication.
            I'm a doggerel man, myself, and my BYU Honors Freshman Lit class introduced me to the Burma Shave oeuvre, although I found it to be a bit abstruse.

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            • Non Sequitur
              Where did I put my bodkin
              • Nov 2008
              • 5773

              #7
              Originally posted by LA Ute View Post
              Rats. I forgot how many BYU grads we have on this board. Next time I'll offer some verse from "Especially for Mormons," or at least appearing in a Deseret Book publication.
              Now don't be knocking BYU. Just because Jack Weyland outsells John Steinbeck in the BYU bookstore, doesn't mean we don't know our literature. Besides, for a book that is basically Love Story with Home Teachers, Charlie has stood the test of time. Weyland is a genius.
              "The mind is not a boomerang. If you throw it too far it will not come back." ~ Tom McGuane

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